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    Post  Darman Sat Apr 03, 2010 12:47 am

    In the not so distant future a crippled defensive line of the United States is on its last leg but is desperate to stay strong since it is the last military base before Area 51, the new head of operations for the united states of America.

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    Post  Dutch Sat Apr 03, 2010 12:59 am

    I think you need more different pieces for the greeblied area and remove the black plate and replace it with a light gray plate.

    Every thing else is good.

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    Post  Darman Sat Apr 03, 2010 1:19 am

    clone killer wrote:I think you need more different pieces for the greeblied area and remove the black plate and replace it with a light gray plate.

    Every thing else is good.

    Here's a tip design some space ships. Wink

    I wanted the black to appear as a road of sorts but I guess Grey does fit the color scheme. Also what does a space ship have to do with the Moc and did you intend to add a link to the words?
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    Post  jj481012 Sat Apr 03, 2010 11:50 am

    You should try this mech design.
    http://www.flickr.com/photos/pyrefyre/3426264224/in/set-72157614756038635/

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    Post  Darman Sat Apr 03, 2010 6:01 pm

    jj481012 wrote:You should try this mech design.
    http://www.flickr.com/photos/pyrefyre/3426264224/in/set-72157614756038635/

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    Personally I prefer to think up my own designs but thanks for the suggestion.

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