Patroling Dagobah

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    Patroling Dagobah

    Post  jj481012 on Thu Jul 01, 2010 2:26 pm

    Ok guys this is just a moc I made at 10:00 last night its just about some stormys patroling Dagobah so enjoy. Smile

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    Re: Patroling Dagobah

    Post  Custom 333 on Thu Jul 01, 2010 2:27 pm

    The commander is great! The rocks are a bit blocky though.

    And snowtroopers in a swamp?? Laughing
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    Re: Patroling Dagobah

    Post  jj481012 on Thu Jul 01, 2010 2:29 pm

    Their supost to be hazard troopers.
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    Post  Custom 333 on Thu Jul 01, 2010 2:31 pm

    They change avatars to monkeys? Laughing
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    Re: Patroling Dagobah

    Post  Dutch on Thu Jul 01, 2010 3:18 pm

    Not it was Hazard who changed every ones avatar to a stupid monkey.

    JJ I deep linked the photos for you.

    Maybe instead of using 2X4 bricks try incorporating different sized slops into the cliff. Some tall trees with vines hanging from their limbs would be a great addition touche.


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    Re: Patroling Dagobah

    Post  TheMissingPiece on Thu Jul 01, 2010 3:19 pm

    Nice MOC overall, although the rocks can use a bit of work. Love the ground texture though. Great photography!
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    Re: Patroling Dagobah

    Post  jj481012 on Thu Jul 01, 2010 3:21 pm

    Thanks for the comments guys mabye my next moc will have a big tree. Wink

    Thanks missing piece all the photos were by me Smile
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    Re: Patroling Dagobah

    Post  Darman on Thu Jul 01, 2010 3:27 pm

    I'll be the first one to say, "What in the he'll were you thinking". I'd pull a rook and circle all the mistakes but since I can't I'll do my best to describe them. First of all the custom clone is full of win and great with this Moc. My issues though is the Over Hang is 2 Studs long the max most people will accept Is a snot pieces STUD sticking out. The mountain is much to blocky and should have some much needed bley roof tile bricks. The random 2x4 brown bricks makes the moc even more artifical then it already is and disrupts the flow of the ground. Use some angle plates and stack them to add a more natural feeling and make a Incline. The other thing that's wrong is this Moc Is rather plain, add some rubble from something like a broken speeder or at least some more plants. I would like to see some more effort into this, I am positive you can do better.
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    Re: Patroling Dagobah

    Post  jj481012 on Thu Jul 01, 2010 3:30 pm

    Its just some moc I made when I was bord Sad
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    Re: Patroling Dagobah

    Post  Custom 333 on Thu Jul 01, 2010 3:34 pm

    Don't take it too hard.

    But if you're just making it for fun, you can't expect A+ reviews.
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    Re: Patroling Dagobah

    Post  Darman on Thu Jul 01, 2010 3:37 pm

    jj481012 wrote:Its just some moc I made when I was bord Sad
    No need for the "Sad" I realize you did this late but you still should at least tell us this isn't the most serious of Moc's, oh and did you make that Custom yourself? Like custom said don't take it to hard this is only one Moc of yours that isn't my favorite.
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    Re: Patroling Dagobah

    Post  TheMissingPiece on Thu Jul 01, 2010 3:37 pm

    Now that I think of it... the rock cliff looks ok! All it needs are some slopes. Wink
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    Re: Patroling Dagobah

    Post  jj481012 on Thu Jul 01, 2010 3:42 pm

    Darman wrote:
    jj481012 wrote:Its just some moc I made when I was bord Sad
    No need for the "Sad" I realize you did this late but you still should at least tell us this isn't the most serious of Moc's, oh and did you make that Custom yourself? Like custom said don't take it to hard this is only one Moc of yours that isn't my favorite.

    Yes I did make the custom and I did say on the link that when I said bord I meant just for fun.
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    Re: Patroling Dagobah

    Post  Darman on Thu Jul 01, 2010 3:43 pm

    jj481012 wrote:
    Darman wrote:
    jj481012 wrote:Its just some moc I made when I was bord Sad
    No need for the "Sad" I realize you did this late but you still should at least tell us this isn't the most serious of Moc's, oh and did you make that Custom yourself? Like custom said don't take it to hard this is only one Moc of yours that isn't my favorite.

    Yes I did make the custom and I did say on the link that when I said bord I meant just for fun.
    I didn't actually check the link, I only saw the DeepLinked images Dutch added.
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    Re: Patroling Dagobah

    Post  CaptainLock on Thu Jul 01, 2010 4:10 pm

    Custom 333 wrote:The commander is great! The rocks are a bit blocky though.

    And snowtroopers in a swamp?? Laughing

    Yeah they are but great job anyway
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    Re: Patroling Dagobah

    Post  customhelmetsman on Thu Jul 01, 2010 4:54 pm

    Smile I think the plants and rocks need to be more random.

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    Re: Patroling Dagobah

    Post  Guest on Thu Jul 01, 2010 5:46 pm

    When making rocks, use slopes instead of 2x4s. They are too blocky. And I think you could have made the ground better. I can see the original baseplate on parts. Try making it a little more even. It is ok, and you almost got it. Just a little more practice. Wink
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    Re: Patroling Dagobah

    Post  Mr.Thrawn on Sat Jul 03, 2010 12:28 am

    Umm where's the stormies, like how you used the visors as pads. How did you add the visor to the minifig?
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    Re: Patroling Dagobah

    Post  jj481012 on Sat Jul 03, 2010 12:39 am

    Well here's how BTW its jonathans design

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    Re: Patroling Dagobah

    Post  Mr.Thrawn on Sat Jul 03, 2010 12:51 am

    ^Hey thanks man, I've been wondering how to do that!
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    Re: Patroling Dagobah

    Post  Darman on Sun Jul 04, 2010 4:17 am

    Thanks, that's quite a unique design I wonder how they thought of it.
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    Re: Patroling Dagobah

    Post  Mr.Thrawn on Sun Jul 04, 2010 7:36 pm

    When you do it like that, it looks like the guys a humpback guy!
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    Re: Patroling Dagobah

    Post  Seven on Sun Jul 04, 2010 7:48 pm

    Thanks for showing that technique I was wondering how that was done!

    stormtroopertj wrote:When you do it like that, it looks like the guys a humpback guy!
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    Re: Patroling Dagobah

    Post  Mr.Thrawn on Sun Jul 04, 2010 11:40 pm

    ^"Guy" is like the word man...GUY!

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