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Darman
TheMissingPiece
Dutch
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jj481012
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Patroling Dagobah
jj481012- Posts : 196
Join date : 2010-04-03
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- Post n°1
Patroling Dagobah
Ok guys this is just a moc I made at 10:00 last night its just about some stormys patroling Dagobah so enjoy.
Link: http://mocpages.com/moc.php/211240
Link: http://mocpages.com/moc.php/211240
Custom 333- C4 is my cousin
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- Post n°2
Re: Patroling Dagobah
The commander is great! The rocks are a bit blocky though.
And snowtroopers in a swamp??
And snowtroopers in a swamp??
jj481012- Posts : 196
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- Post n°3
Re: Patroling Dagobah
Their supost to be hazard troopers.
Custom 333- C4 is my cousin
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- Post n°4
Re: Patroling Dagobah
They change avatars to monkeys?
- Post n°5
Re: Patroling Dagobah
Not it was Hazard who changed every ones avatar to a stupid monkey.
JJ I deep linked the photos for you.
Maybe instead of using 2X4 bricks try incorporating different sized slops into the cliff. Some tall trees with vines hanging from their limbs would be a great addition touche.
JJ I deep linked the photos for you.
Maybe instead of using 2X4 bricks try incorporating different sized slops into the cliff. Some tall trees with vines hanging from their limbs would be a great addition touche.
TheMissingPiece- Unaware Admin
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- Post n°6
Re: Patroling Dagobah
Nice MOC overall, although the rocks can use a bit of work. Love the ground texture though. Great photography!
jj481012- Posts : 196
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- Post n°7
Re: Patroling Dagobah
Thanks for the comments guys mabye my next moc will have a big tree.
Thanks missing piece all the photos were by me
Thanks missing piece all the photos were by me
Darman- The *Facepalm* Tree
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- Post n°8
Re: Patroling Dagobah
I'll be the first one to say, "What in the he'll were you thinking". I'd pull a rook and circle all the mistakes but since I can't I'll do my best to describe them. First of all the custom clone is full of win and great with this Moc. My issues though is the Over Hang is 2 Studs long the max most people will accept Is a snot pieces STUD sticking out. The mountain is much to blocky and should have some much needed bley roof tile bricks. The random 2x4 brown bricks makes the moc even more artifical then it already is and disrupts the flow of the ground. Use some angle plates and stack them to add a more natural feeling and make a Incline. The other thing that's wrong is this Moc Is rather plain, add some rubble from something like a broken speeder or at least some more plants. I would like to see some more effort into this, I am positive you can do better.
jj481012- Posts : 196
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- Post n°9
Re: Patroling Dagobah
Its just some moc I made when I was bord
Custom 333- C4 is my cousin
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Re: Patroling Dagobah
Don't take it too hard.
But if you're just making it for fun, you can't expect A+ reviews.
But if you're just making it for fun, you can't expect A+ reviews.
Darman- The *Facepalm* Tree
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Re: Patroling Dagobah
No need for the "" I realize you did this late but you still should at least tell us this isn't the most serious of Moc's, oh and did you make that Custom yourself? Like custom said don't take it to hard this is only one Moc of yours that isn't my favorite.jj481012 wrote:Its just some moc I made when I was bord
TheMissingPiece- Unaware Admin
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- Post n°12
Re: Patroling Dagobah
Now that I think of it... the rock cliff looks ok! All it needs are some slopes.
jj481012- Posts : 196
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- Post n°13
Re: Patroling Dagobah
Darman wrote:No need for the "" I realize you did this late but you still should at least tell us this isn't the most serious of Moc's, oh and did you make that Custom yourself? Like custom said don't take it to hard this is only one Moc of yours that isn't my favorite.jj481012 wrote:Its just some moc I made when I was bord
Yes I did make the custom and I did say on the link that when I said bord I meant just for fun.
Darman- The *Facepalm* Tree
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Re: Patroling Dagobah
I didn't actually check the link, I only saw the DeepLinked images Dutch added.jj481012 wrote:Darman wrote:No need for the "" I realize you did this late but you still should at least tell us this isn't the most serious of Moc's, oh and did you make that Custom yourself? Like custom said don't take it to hard this is only one Moc of yours that isn't my favorite.jj481012 wrote:Its just some moc I made when I was bord
Yes I did make the custom and I did say on the link that when I said bord I meant just for fun.
CaptainLock- Posts : 894
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- Post n°15
Re: Patroling Dagobah
Custom 333 wrote:The commander is great! The rocks are a bit blocky though.
And snowtroopers in a swamp??
Yeah they are but great job anyway
customhelmetsman- Posts : 118
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- Post n°16
Re: Patroling Dagobah
I think the plants and rocks need to be more random.
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- Post n°17
Re: Patroling Dagobah
When making rocks, use slopes instead of 2x4s. They are too blocky. And I think you could have made the ground better. I can see the original baseplate on parts. Try making it a little more even. It is ok, and you almost got it. Just a little more practice.
Mr.Thrawn-  
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- Post n°18
Re: Patroling Dagobah
Umm where's the stormies, like how you used the visors as pads. How did you add the visor to the minifig?
Mr.Thrawn-  
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Re: Patroling Dagobah
^Hey thanks man, I've been wondering how to do that!
Darman- The *Facepalm* Tree
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Thanks, that's quite a unique design I wonder how they thought of it.
Mr.Thrawn-  
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Re: Patroling Dagobah
When you do it like that, it looks like the guys a humpback guy!
Seven- Wacky *times 7
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- Post n°23
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Thanks for showing that technique I was wondering how that was done!
Like the word ''guy'' much?stormtroopertj wrote:When you do it like that, it looks like the guys a humpback guy!
Mr.Thrawn-  
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^"Guy" is like the word man...GUY!
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