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    Hank

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    Ambush!

    Post  Hank on Sun Jul 18, 2010 9:59 pm

    I'm gonna send in an application for the CABG guild, which will include my previous items, this, and my little bird. This was made for clone reasons.

    An 821st legion scout comes by some droids. He waits for the best shot... Blam! One down, one to go.



    (Sorry for no normal view, it was corrupted.)




    C&C are welcome!
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    Seven

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    Re: Ambush!

    Post  Seven on Sun Jul 18, 2010 10:03 pm

    Not bad but it's a bit bare...
    It could use some more plants, Rocks and trees but overall this is pretty good Very Happy
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    Hank

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    Re: Ambush!

    Post  Hank on Sun Jul 18, 2010 10:05 pm

    Yea, I would've put more in, but it was a bit rushed and all of my other plants are being used.
    Anyways thanks!

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    Re: Ambush!

    Post  Guest on Sun Jul 18, 2010 10:40 pm

    Oh jeez
    Darman is goign to have a field day.

    It looks like I could have built that in under 60 seconds... Embarassed
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    TheMissingPiece

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    Re: Ambush!

    Post  TheMissingPiece on Sun Jul 18, 2010 10:44 pm

    Same here, unfortunately.


    Quick, lock it before he comes!


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    Hank

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    Re: Ambush!

    Post  Hank on Sun Jul 18, 2010 10:45 pm

    ^^... Had nothing else to spice it up.

    Too slow for Hank there...

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    CaptainLock

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    Re: Ambush!

    Post  CaptainLock on Mon Jul 19, 2010 8:28 am

    SirWacky wrote:Not bad but it's a bit bare...
    It could use some more plants, Rocks and trees but overall this is pretty good Very Happy
    Yeah I was gonna say that to but nice moc anyway.
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    Re: Ambush!

    Post  Custom 333 on Mon Jul 19, 2010 2:15 pm

    It's not bad if you weren't really serious, but CABG app... Neutral
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    Hank

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    Re: Ambush!

    Post  Hank on Mon Jul 19, 2010 4:04 pm

    ^ I have like 6 other mocs that are better to go with this...
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    Re: Ambush!

    Post  Darman on Thu Jul 22, 2010 5:04 am



    Were to start, well I can start in a number of places.

    1. You had a base plate you threw Stalks on it, Add More Detail to the ground! Layer green plates to add a effect!

    2. The rock doesn't even look remotly organic and it looks like you put it there since there was no detail everywhere else.

    3. Look above and replace "The Rock" with "The Tree".

    4. It just is to plain and it doesn't look organic enough, did you spend any time on this?

    5. I know for a fact you can do better, so do better and put more effort into your Mocs.

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