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    Post  Hank Tue Jul 27, 2010 5:03 pm

    A series I am starting about the 821st legion's commander being stuck on Felucia.

    Felucia. Now a days when the planet is brought up I think (H word). I was scheduled to take out some droids known to be stationed there. The reason why felucia is so dangerous, Is because you don't only have to face a crapload of droids, but also the native species...

    My whole platoon was killed. I managed to survive. Now I must find a way to contact Master Shinoli, or anyone...


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    A link to the rest of the pics just in case you want to check something out.

    Is this good Darman?

    C&C are welcome.
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    Post  TheMissingPiece Tue Jul 27, 2010 6:06 pm

    I am very jealous of your high amount of lime. <.<

    This is waaay better than your previous MOCs. All it needs is some larger exotic plants. Smile
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    Post  Hank Tue Jul 27, 2010 6:09 pm

    ^ PAB makes it all easy...

    The next one will have bigger and better plants, + action. Just need to think up the plants...
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    Post  Darman Tue Jul 27, 2010 6:18 pm

    Thank you Hank for making a effort to add some layering but I still have some issues. A couple areas really don't rise gradually as nature would, it just pops up like some micro-earth quake decided to shoot up a piece of dirt. You should also add more vegetation, look at Revos Moc for help.
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    Post  CaptainLock Tue Jul 27, 2010 6:21 pm

    TheMissingPiece wrote:I am very jealous of your high amount of lime. <.<

    This is waaay better than your previous MOCs. All it needs is some larger exotic plants. Smile
    Nice but I agree with TMP it needs more exotic plants.
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    Post  Hank Tue Jul 27, 2010 6:31 pm

    ^^ Will try to do that in next one.

    ^ Same and thanks.

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