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    The_Custom_One

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    Nssis-Class Clawcraft

    Post  The_Custom_One on Thu Aug 12, 2010 5:14 pm

    Here is something I made for the CABGOII Phase 4.
    The Nssis-Class Clawcraft.The Nssis-class Clawcraft was a starfighter normally associated with the Chiss, but in fact was a hybrid development of standard Imperial technology.

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    Here is a Link to my gallery for it.

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    Re: Nssis-Class Clawcraft

    Post  Guest on Thu Aug 12, 2010 5:20 pm

    I quite like it, but the front ends of the wings (the part the gets flat) have holes in them. I would fill them some how. Other than that, very nice.
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    Re: Nssis-Class Clawcraft

    Post  The_Custom_One on Thu Aug 12, 2010 5:20 pm

    Hazard with a Glove wrote:I quite like it, but the front ends of the wings (the part the gets flat) have holes in them. I would fill them some how. Other than that, very nice.

    Hmm, I never thought of that, I might fix that.
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    Re: Nssis-Class Clawcraft

    Post  Rijulskywalker on Thu Aug 12, 2010 5:21 pm

    Maybe some SNOT on the wings? Pretty cool! Good luck!
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    Re: Nssis-Class Clawcraft

    Post  The_Custom_One on Thu Aug 12, 2010 5:22 pm

    Rijulskywalker wrote:Maybe some SNOT on the wings? Pretty cool! Good luck!

    The only problem is it wouldn't be completely smooth because of the plates I used.
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    Re: Nssis-Class Clawcraft

    Post  Dutch on Thu Aug 12, 2010 5:28 pm

    The shape of wings is really nice, but cockpit doesn't seem to fit with the style. Try adding more greebles around the cockpit.


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    Re: Nssis-Class Clawcraft

    Post  Hank on Thu Aug 12, 2010 5:34 pm

    This is really nice building! Just add a lil' greeblerz and it will be perfect.
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    Re: Nssis-Class Clawcraft

    Post  The_Custom_One on Thu Aug 12, 2010 5:35 pm

    Hank wrote:This is really nice building! Just add a lil' greeblerz and it will be perfect.

    Thanks, it didn't get me first though. Oh well.
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    Re: Nssis-Class Clawcraft

    Post  Hank on Thu Aug 12, 2010 5:40 pm

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    Re: Nssis-Class Clawcraft

    Post  Mr.Thrawn on Thu Aug 12, 2010 10:43 pm

    This is full of awesomesauce, looks more like a Tie-fighter because of its wings and cockpit, good job! Wink
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    Re: Nssis-Class Clawcraft

    Post  The_Custom_One on Thu Aug 12, 2010 11:17 pm

    stormtroopertj wrote:This is full of awesomesauce, looks more like a Tie-fighter because of its wings and cockpit, good job! Wink

    It is a Tie Fighter, but a different kind.
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    Re: Nssis-Class Clawcraft

    Post  Custom 333 on Fri Aug 13, 2010 5:11 pm

    The base hurts it. I like the wings, I think the cockpit is what could be fixed a bit, as it's blocky now.
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    Re: Nssis-Class Clawcraft

    Post  CaptainLock on Sat Aug 14, 2010 6:19 am

    Custom 333 wrote:The base hurts it. I like the wings, I think the cockpit is what could be fixed a bit, as it's blocky now.
    I agree with C3 it is a bit blocky but that could easily be sorted out
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    Re: Nssis-Class Clawcraft

    Post  The_Custom_One on Sat Aug 14, 2010 4:55 pm

    Yeah, I re did some of the cockpit, so when I get a chance, I will post new pictures of it.

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