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    Alpha Beta

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    What lies Below

    Post  Alpha Beta on Fri Oct 15, 2010 11:41 pm

    Hoth is under attack! A rebel is facing a snow-trooper, and below him, in the numerous hoth tunnels, 2 more rebels are running for their lives. Below them, is a clone pilot, who was caught by a native, but was preserved from a sudden snow storm.
















    Now befor you comment, I know there are some inacurrate things, the alien, the clone trooper, and I know that the walls in the tunnels where white, and grey. Wink
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    Re: What lies Below

    Post  Energy107 on Sat Oct 16, 2010 1:39 am

    Good Job I like the two rebels running for their lives, however it seems a bit blocky.
    Wink :yes:
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    Re: What lies Below

    Post  Alpha Beta on Sat Oct 16, 2010 1:48 am

    ^Do you mean the trench, because, ya that was blocky.
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    Re: What lies Below

    Post  bl*c on Sat Oct 16, 2010 1:50 am

    It looks nice.

    Everything except the fact that the rebels have their feet implanted into the floor in the second level.
    And that Talz aren't natives to Hoth.

    I really like the idea of being preserved in ice too. Smile
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    Re: What lies Below

    Post  Alpha Beta on Sat Oct 16, 2010 1:52 am

    At the bottom I mentioned that. Putting the feet in the floor was just so much better for balance though. Wink
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    Re: What lies Below

    Post  bl*c on Sat Oct 16, 2010 1:59 am

    There were so many pics, I couldn't tell that was there. :-P
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    Re: What lies Below

    Post  Alpha Beta on Sat Oct 16, 2010 2:01 am

    Ya, I am very thourough with my pics. Razz
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    Re: What lies Below

    Post  CaptainLock on Sat Oct 16, 2010 7:33 am

    Nice I really like the Talz and the clonetrooper scene at the bottom.
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    Re: What lies Below

    Post  Seven on Sat Oct 16, 2010 10:38 am

    Its okay... The top is kinda blocky, The corridor is good but it could use more detail on the walls, I'm not really liking the scene on the bottom at all though.
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    Re: What lies Below

    Post  Alpha Beta on Sat Oct 16, 2010 12:22 pm

    ^How can I improve it?
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    Re: What lies Below

    Post  Seven on Sat Oct 16, 2010 12:24 pm

    Alpha Beta wrote:^How can I improve it?

    Make the top scene less blocky. Razz Add more greebles/details to the wall on the second one, And just leave out or replace the last one. Wink

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    Re: What lies Below

    Post  Custom 333 on Sat Oct 16, 2010 3:40 pm

    Clones, rebels, and snowies, all at the same time? No. Laughing

    The scene is OK, just do what Seven said.
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    Re: What lies Below

    Post  Alpha Beta on Sat Oct 16, 2010 11:22 pm

    Seven ★ wrote:
    Alpha Beta wrote:^How can I improve it?

    Make the top scene less blocky. Razz Add more greebles/details to the wall on the second one, And just leave out or replace the last one. Wink

    Oh and good luck getting into the guild! Very Happy

    Haven't even got there yet, I have a LOT going on in my life right now.

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