My lil jet thing

I kinda threw this together when I built. I really like it. A lot. So I guess I'll share it.

With a lil droid


Closed in the pit


Rear shot


Flyin into the rainy sunset/sunrise


EDIT:

Now with more yellow

Here is my infamous criticism.
It's too short.
It's just a cockpit with wings.
The wings are just one piece and lack detail.
Get a better backdrop. The back is too annoying.
Add more yellow if it's supposed to be a yellow and black fighter.

Meh, it's a 4/10 IMHO.

It's cool in it's simplicity actually.

There, it's edited with some pics of it with yellow. Tadaa, I aim to please so long as I still like the toy.... Which I do..

Simple but effective, Nice work!

This looks like some clone ship i did far back, but with SNOT for wings.

Hank wrote:This looks like some clone ship i did far back, but with SNOT for wings.

They don't drip...

No, no, no, no.
SNOT=Studs Not On Top

Custom 333 wrote:It's cool in it's simplicity actually.

SirWacky wrote:Simple but effective, Nice work!

As Squirrel said, all I see is a plate, a window sitting on the plate, and large slopes as wings. Try giving more of a body.

I gor once love it, I think it looks like an airspeeder (snowspeeder, sandspeeder) for ground flying and scouting in the planet looking for enemy ground forces!

stormtroopertj wrote:I gor once love it, I think it looks like an airspeeder (snowspeeder, sandspeeder) for ground flying and scouting in the planet looking for enemy ground forces!

See, he gets the point of the toy

Yep, although it looks like a light speeder, it woul blow up easily.

stormtroopertj wrote:Yep, although it looks like a light speeder, it woul blow up easily.

It's more for SWOOSHing than PEWPEWPEWing

Aww, so it's a recon airspeeder, I see.

stormtroopertj wrote:Aww, so it's a recon airspeeder, I see.

Exactry!

Well add a weedle bit more armor, okay!
Seriously, weedle? Now c'mon...

Yeah, seiously.

Since you seem to enjoy being Blunt I'll do the same.

1. To many visible studs and has no flow.

2. The color scheme is terrible and there is NO detail.

3. The engine is a single piece with no detail and looks terrible.

4. The weaponry once again is a single piece and looks terrible.

5. The Extra stud length on top is pointless and makes this Moc look even worse, if that is possible.

No Flow, No Detail, Single Piece Weaponry and Engine, pointless bricks, this is perhaps the worst Moc I've ever seen and I think I've said terrible 3 times thats saying something!

Suggestions.

1. Use Snot!

2. Make the engine bigger and don't keep it a single piece.

3. Make your own wings rather then using two bricks to do it.

4. Make the weapons bigger, tuck them under the wing and add some tubing, Grilles, Ect to it.

I mean really...

/funeral

Custom 333 wrote:/funeral

Was that addressed to me getting banned or something else.

Darman wrote:

Custom 333 wrote:/funeral

Was that addressed to me getting banned or something else.

I believe the ship

Actually I made my own version of this with loads of SNOT but I can't take any good pictures because of the fact that my photo studio is two pieces of white paper

He meant the funeral of Bioata's MOC.

Oh in that case,
.

^LOL


You think it's dead but wait till you see my version, the Mah lil jet thing 2.0

SirWacky wrote:^LOL


You think it's dead but wait till you see my version, the Mah lil jet thing 2.0

I actually hope he posts that, I don't like it when people do not improve there skills. Isn't that the whole point of Brick Ark and the Cabg?

Darman wrote:

SirWacky wrote:^LOL


You think it's dead but wait till you see my version, the Mah lil jet thing 2.0

I actually hope he posts that, I don't like it when people do not improve there skills. Isn't that the whole point of Brick Ark and the Cabg?

No he's banned

I made the mah little jet thing 2.0 but I can't post it because my photo studio is too small