Brickpocalypse - Intro

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    TheMissingPiece

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    Brickpocalypse - Intro

    Post  TheMissingPiece on Mon Aug 16, 2010 7:31 pm

    After reading Darman's Brickpocapypse story, I remembered about a little stop-motion idea I had in my mind a while ago. Before you read the story-board, listen to this:



    Now, here we go, and listen as you read:


    Eerrie "oooo" part of the song:
    Our main character (TMP or Denal) climbs out of his bunker, disheveled, but not hurt. He starts walking around and views the surrounding area. There is no life.

    Louder, broader "opera" part of the song:
    Pods (or spaceships) come out of the sky and start landing into the ground.

    Instrumental part of the song: the invaders climb out of their vehicles, stretching and transforming into something insect-like and creepy.

    next part of instrumentals:
    Our main characters friends (members from BrickArk and other) come out too and arm themselves.

    Opera part:
    The two sides clash, killing each other using multiple tactics, including weapons fire, melee and explosives.

    Instrumentals:
    In the invader mothership (in orbit around the now deadened earth), the commander sends out the order to send in more vessels, and more ships start penatrating earth's atmosphere.

    Opera:
    More fighting, and at the end of the instrumentals, somone fires a rocketand the screen goes white.

    Slow, solemn part:
    The main character emerges from the dust and derbis and serveys the casualties. There are many losses on both sides, but mainly the humans. he walks around, and he and his friends follow him. More casualties are seen, and at the instrumental's climax, the main character spots his wife and kneels and weeps.

    Powerful part/end:
    The invaders have trimphed, and the humans flee slowly, but surely. The main charachter looks back, with a look in his eyes that he will get revenge, whatever it takes.


    Anyways, the format was wierd, I know, but if you get it, please comment!
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    Re: Brickpocalypse - Intro

    Post  Custom 333 on Mon Aug 16, 2010 7:35 pm

    Not bad, now you've spoiled your plot should there ever be a real video you make. Laughing All the turns (particularly the "accompaniments")in the story are starting to branch out too far though.
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    Post  TheMissingPiece on Mon Aug 16, 2010 7:38 pm

    Really? How so? They are just sub-plots in the story, made to enhance the main plot.
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    Re: Brickpocalypse - Intro

    Post  Darman on Mon Aug 16, 2010 7:39 pm

    I agree with custom, its starting to become the Star Wars of Lego.
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    Re: Brickpocalypse - Intro

    Post  CaptainLock on Tue Aug 17, 2010 6:05 am

    Nice story but I read it twice before the song ended so I think you should put it in a story.
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    Re: Brickpocalypse - Intro

    Post  Alpha Beta on Tue Aug 17, 2010 3:36 pm

    Now where fighting insects? Laughing

    First zombies, then World War 3, now insects, whats next, the classic robot?
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    Re: Brickpocalypse - Intro

    Post  Seven on Tue Aug 17, 2010 4:02 pm

    Random Guy 88 wrote:the classic robot?

    Heck yes!

    Nice work TMPeh, I can't wait to see it when its finished Very Happy
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    Re: Brickpocalypse - Intro

    Post  Darman on Tue Aug 17, 2010 8:22 pm

    Hey, you guys don't make the story we all do mostly me though. Razz The robots came in 20 years after *Spoiler Alert!* after Sir Wacky dies, but it was only one nicknamed "The Disease"
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    Re: Brickpocalypse - Intro

    Post  King Bearatuar on Tue Oct 19, 2010 11:17 pm

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    Post  Alpha Beta on Wed Oct 20, 2010 12:53 am

    ^Wait to bump
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    Re: Brickpocalypse - Intro

    Post  King Bearatuar on Wed Oct 20, 2010 11:49 am

    Bump? (Facepalm from half of the Ark)
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    Re: Brickpocalypse - Intro

    Post  Alpha Beta on Wed Oct 20, 2010 8:31 pm

    /facepalm

    The last post was on August 17th, and it is October 20th!
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    Post  TheMissingPiece on Wed Oct 20, 2010 11:01 pm

    I'll most likely be bumping this regularly, so it doesn't really matter.

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