Destroy the cloning machine! (Hidden lab)

The hero has to get past the alien monster (Brickmaster set rebuilt) to destroy the cloning machine.

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Could do with some computers and a little bit more detail.

Its not good...It could use some detail and some better structure, instead of the walls being plates perhaps bricks with some greebles on them? The cloning machine needs to look like a cloning machine, not a over sized blender. I think some tube and grille pieces would make it a bit more Clonish and maybe a tube that can fit a minifigure?

Eh. Thanks for the feed back though.

I'll add some more things if I can, my collection stinks for MOCing though, it's mostly plates and large bricks.

to be honest
its not very good.
i would suggest making it maybe more like kamino and the cloning machine more like a bacta tank.
and adding some computers like captainlock said and maybe some greebles.

Excellent quoting.

As others have said, it's rather plain. I can't stand the use of the plates as walls, the underside makes for some pretty ugly detailing. The cloning machine is good and well designed, but the rest of the hall could use some details and greebles to establish this as a "lab". If your collection stinks, then try to build with what you have- try shrinking down the hall size to allow for bricked walls and more details.

It's a good start, though.

No need to dig this up Flynn, it's almost half a year old!