Brickpocalypse: Noob attack.

Since the tag has frozen, I'm just gonna go and post my MOC.



Mah new sigfig.


Oe noes! Teh ADMIN is firin teh ban rocket! Mommy!!!

LOLwut?

This is pretty cool but its pretty bare apart from the little wall thingy.
And why do you have to have a siggy that I only have the head and hair of

Unless you really want to hear my criticism, I don't feel as if I should tell it to you publically.

Time to bust out my Uber-Critical skillz.

1. You need to label it as a accompaniment since you were not tagged by Hazard to do this.

2. The destroyed fence thing is pretty good but if it is a walll it is very thin, much to thin in fact.

3. There is NO detail whatsoever, its just flat ground with mini-figures and a fence or a wall.

4. This doesn't even look like its in a urban area side walks aren't that big and roads aren't grey there black and the grille black plates aren't on roads either.

Suggestions

1. Add more details!

2. Turn the base to Black to make it look like a road or add more walls to make it looked like a destroyed Moc.

3. Possibly use Snot to make the road and add little indentations with multiply layers and plates.

You can defiantly do better!

Rabid_Squirrel wrote:Unless you really want to hear my criticism, I don't feel as if I should tell it to you publically.

Oh no! The Squirrel doesn't like it! What am I going to do! OMFG! The sky is falling! I'm ruined!

Custom 333 wrote:

Rabid_Squirrel wrote:Unless you really want to hear my criticism, I don't feel as if I should tell it to you publically.

Oh no! The Squirrel doesn't like it! What am I going to do! OMFG! The sky is falling! I'm ruined!

I wouldn't be laughing that hard Custom it really looks like you half-arsed this as a joke.

I can't wait to see what Rabid says!

SirWacky wrote:I can't wait to see what Rabid says!

I agree.

As you obviously need my help, here out goes.
Overall it looks like s**t. It's vertical plates and a floor. What's up with the random black grille plate?What's up with the clean line of the black? If you
were trying to make a road, it didn't work, but if
you were imitating burnt ground, it would be a lot more rough on the end. Why is the Admin standing on air? If he is standing on boxes, why are they perfectly lined up and straight if this is an apocalypse MOC? Why did you even make this? You weren't tagged. If this was just a random MOC, why did you name it the same thing as the game? I really don't like this, stick with customs instead.

Actually, it's not too bad, although it would be more classified as a WIP. Here's my suggestions, not criticism.


- The ground is a bit too plain, IMHO, but the "fortress" is actually quite nice itself. maybe try scrapping a few sets too get the rubble together.

- Walls! It needs more walls! Try using regular 1 by X bricks, with a few slopes to imitate a broken wall effect.

- Figs! The "Noobs" are a bit colorful, IMO, and aren't noobs really just CW Troopers?


I actually quite like your fig especially, with the arm decals. Try again, and put some more effort into this!
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PS: It doesn't look like sh**, it's just crud at the moment.



Remember, everyone, use Constructive Criticism, not Destructive Criticism!

@ Rabid: Ouch. I've built quite a few good MOCs thank you very much. This one wasn't that good, but if you're just going to go around saying "Get out of MOCing" to everyone, you should quit after all.

I'm sorry, I may need to put glasses, but where did I say stop MOCing? I said that your custom creations were better than your MOC's. Besides, have you never heard "it has to get worse before it gets better"?

You told me, "stick to customs instead."

W/e

I have to agree theres a difference between Critical/Suggestive and just being plain rude.

agree that post was a littleout of line, but i've become a very critical person. I really don't know how or why.

Rabid bunny wrote: agree that post was a littleout of line, but i've become a very critical person. I really don't know how or why.

You can go to rehab with Darman.

Lolwut? Rehab?! I just got back from ther a few hours ago!







Just Kidding.

Well after that little thing people refer to the "Machine Gun Mis-Fire" I haven't been accepted into rehab for fear of loss of life. I'm not that rude I tell people whats wrong with it then make suggestions on what they can do to improve it. I just remove all that "Its Interesting" bull crap.