BrickApocalypse: A new arrival to the prison

Sir Wacky has been captured by Raiders on bought to an underground prison in the middle of desert.

Sir Wacky discuss the day to day things of the Ark to Dutch.


A lone Raider on guard



I tag Hazard

great moc dutch. can you take a pic of just the figs though?

Oh noez I iz captured? D:


Really though nice MOC, I like the little cracks in the wall.

Aww darnit you made a raider, I had a different design for them.

Nice MOC.

What is that weird black thing.

It's suppose to be a burnt tree.

Take a pic of the raider, I want to see what they look like.

If that black thing is supposed to be a burnt tree, it needs some work. At the moment it's far to mechanical to be a thing of nature, I would add curves to the outstretched limbs and make said limbs a tad longer. And while the hand technique is creative, I think it should be used sparingly, as too many of them makes it look less like a tree and more like some odd telescope-type thing, given the context of the creation.

Other than that, though, it's fairly good. The landscaping's fairly decent, though there's only so much you can do with a vignette, and the colors are fairly well-spread out. My only real complaint besides the trees would be the cracks in the prison wall, which look less like cracks and more like gaps created out of laziness, no offense intended. I would try working with mere discoloration rather than gaps, as that might get the effect across a little better.