Flynn Sat Sep 11, 2010 4:44 am
Several things that need work-
- I do not like the usage of the large sloped pieces as the main body. To use those types of pieces effectively, you have to be able to have it flow naturally with the rest of the ship, such as what -2 x 4-'s done with some of his older ships. I would either try to meld those in with the rest of the ship, or just get rid of them altogether.
- The wings are way too thin and way too plain. They're just plates stuck on top of each other. At the very least, they need some greebling and detailing, though I would suggest using SNOT'd bricks for the wings here.
- The back half of the ship is far too under-detailed, and needs something to break up the monotony of the big curved slopes. I would put in some engine detailing of some sort, as this thing doesn't seem to have propulsion of any sort right now.
- Color. Seriously, even a dab of color would improve it greatly. Right now it's just grey and dark grey with a yellow chair- it's visually unappealing, and needs something to make it more lively.
So, yeah, it needs work. I think if you work on the points listed above, it'll start to look a lot better. So, just keep working on it!
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