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    Re: Brick Apocalypse.

    Post  Dutch on Mon Aug 23, 2010 2:56 am

    That's true.



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    Re: Brick Apocalypse.

    Post  Darman on Mon Aug 23, 2010 2:56 am

    I'll fix up your image soon enough Dutch, soon enough. Razz
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    Re: Brick Apocalypse.

    Post  jj481012 on Mon Aug 23, 2010 2:13 pm

    Hay darman include me too I'm part of the apoc too Neutral
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    Re: Brick Apocalypse.

    Post  Custom 333 on Mon Aug 23, 2010 3:49 pm

    Darman wrote:I wasn't talking about the swearing, I was pretty sure the majority of us do it in real life. I was talking about making you look like a pompous douche who is obsessed with a hammer with no real advantage to using it and seized control of the Ark group. Laughing
    That and grabbing a land mine. Laughing
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    Re: Brick Apocalypse.

    Post  Mr.Thrawn on Mon Aug 23, 2010 4:38 pm

    SirWacky wrote:
    stormtroopertj wrote:Hey, this is pretty good, what's the sexual content here?

    I'm sure you'd be interested in that. Razz

    Yes, I would! Razz Laughing
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    Re: Brick Apocalypse.

    Post  Darman on Mon Aug 23, 2010 5:51 pm

    Custom 333 wrote:
    Darman wrote:I wasn't talking about the swearing, I was pretty sure the majority of us do it in real life. I was talking about making you look like a pompous douche who is obsessed with a hammer with no real advantage to using it and seized control of the Ark group. Laughing
    That and grabbing a land mine. Laughing

    That was a land mind though, a trap laid by *Spolier*.
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    Re: Brick Apocalypse.

    Post  Darman on Thu Aug 26, 2010 2:57 am

    Darman returns. Wacky in denial. Has my feeble attempts at writing finally cracked your skull into a in repairable mush of bone and flesh? If it has then I'll be fucking amazed because that isn't physically possible unless I struck a grenade in your mouth the second you stopped reading this. Hey look behind you. Did you look?



    (Come'on Dar, my turn to tell the story).
    So here we are, Dutch missing, Denal dead, overall not the best day to be me. At the time I was, how do I put it? Unstable? Our leader is dead and our second in command is dead, leader wise we were screwed. With Hazard literally at his death bed we didn't know what the hell to do, Dutch coordinated all the scouting efforts and did the jobs we refused or didn't want to do. We were fucking chicken without its head with Dutch gone. None of us knew what in the fuck to do. (I knew wh- shut the hell up Darman.) We had plans, but of course I'm getting a bit ahead of myself. Darmans voice seemingly sprouted out of the darkness consuming our base. "Wacky!"
    "Darman!" I cried out "Did you find anything of use, food? Wait, weres Dutch, Denal." When I saw the look on his face I knew, its amazing what horror a single expression can do to a person. I just stood there, My brain wasn't able to process the truth, Denal and Dutch were dead. Gone. Never to walk the earth. I just collapsed on the ground in disbelief, there was no way they were dead. No way.

    Tune in next week, for War Of The Worlds. CABG Addition.

    I know the chapter length may have disappointed you, as always. But I intend to write, Much, Much longer chapters if I can fine the time. I'm talking 3-5 pages long if I can manage it. Wish me luck!
    I'll sure as hell need it.
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    Re: Brick Apocalypse.

    Post  customhelmetsman on Thu Aug 26, 2010 4:13 am

    good luck.
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    Re: Brick Apocalypse.

    Post  Seven on Thu Aug 26, 2010 9:10 am

    Nice! I like the fact that I was in it. Very Happy
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    Re: Brick Apocalypse.

    Post  Dutch on Thu Aug 26, 2010 3:37 pm

    Ah good the staff has all been killed off.



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    Re: Brick Apocalypse.

    Post  Seven on Thu Aug 26, 2010 3:47 pm

    Dutch wrote:Ah good the staff has all been killed off.


    For once I'm happy I'm not staff. Laughing Take that you ****es! Please don't ban me. Razz
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    Re: Brick Apocalypse.

    Post  Alpha Beta on Thu Aug 26, 2010 5:26 pm

    Good luck, and I can't wait to be included. Very Happy
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    Re: Brick Apocalypse.

    Post  Custom 333 on Thu Aug 26, 2010 6:37 pm

    Darman wrote:Darman returns. Wacky in denial.
    Finally a shortened version. Laughing
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    Re: Brick Apocalypse.

    Post  jj481012 on Thu Aug 26, 2010 9:08 pm

    Weres me Sad
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    Re: Brick Apocalypse.

    Post  TheMissingPiece on Thu Aug 26, 2010 9:19 pm

    Only main characters, ie those who have been tagged, are included in the story right now, JJ. Sorry. Sad
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    Post  Custom 333 on Thu Aug 26, 2010 9:58 pm

    TheMissingPiece wrote:Only main characters, ie those who have been tagged, are included in the story right now, JJ. Sorry. Sad
    'cept me. Sad
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    Re: Brick Apocalypse.

    Post  Darman on Thu Aug 26, 2010 10:02 pm

    You were originally on your death bed then I thought, crap better be Hazard forgot about him. Laughing I'll try to phase you in eventually.

    @Dutch Hazard is just dying, not dead. Wink And Denal is alive, but captured.



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    Re: Brick Apocalypse.

    Post  Custom 333 on Thu Aug 26, 2010 10:03 pm

    Imma teh dedz? I thought this was before the sniper incident, I was there!
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    Re: Brick Apocalypse.

    Post  Darman on Thu Aug 26, 2010 10:04 pm

    You were dead in the first draft. Wink
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    Re: Brick Apocalypse.

    Post  Darman on Sun Aug 29, 2010 9:27 pm

    Its been quite some time since a update hasn't it? Heres a treat for you all, while it may not be the 5 page thriller I promised its still something.


    Wild Update appeared. Go Readers! Readers used Comment! Its super effective!

    (Ok Wacky, you've told your part of the story gimmie the Mic)
    It seemed like a split second after I was noticed by wacky he fainted, just a dead wait on the ground. At the time I was thinking Are you shiting me, I fucking walked through miles of forest fought god damn tons of raiders just to drag wackys body back to base! As I was walking toward wacky I noticed him moving a bit, "Wacky?" He stirred a bit more. "Wacky! For fucks sake get you god damn self off the ground!" That got him up. He stared at me for a second, and said "They aren't dead Dar, are they?"
    "I don't know wacky" I replied
    "What? How the fuck not, you didn't fucking abandon them in a fight did you?" He said angerly.
    Would he actually think I would do that? I guess so. "No, I would never fucking do that and you ought to know. Denal is dead, he was shot by a raider and we couldn't recover his body, I'm sorry."
    Wacky gulped a bit, "Dutch?" Came his almost child like small voice.
    ""Like I said before I don't know, he was dragged off by god knows what and he just disappered. I don't know were the hell he is or were he could be" Then a voice seemingly came out of no were. "Wacky! Sorry man, we were suppose to switch guard duty hours ago I for- Darman?" It was custom. I sighed in my head, I'm not a fucking story teller for Christs sake. "I'll tell you back at base, Custom do you think you could pull a couple people off patrol I have something to tell you all" I said.
    "Uh, yeah" he said apparently oblivious to the lack of Dutchs and Denals presence. "We've just got Alpha and TMP out."
    "Get them back here, were going to have to be without patrols for a bit"
    "That important 'eh?" Then it hit him, he looked around a bit almost comedicly. "Uh, Darman. Were is Dutch, Denal?"
    In response I simply said "I'll tell you at base, now go get TMP and Alpha" and I walked away with wacky in tow as Custom stood there watching.
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    Re: Brick Apocalypse.

    Post  Custom 333 on Sun Aug 29, 2010 9:36 pm

    ROFL I'm stupid. Laughing
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    Post  1 Million Watts of Power on Sun Aug 29, 2010 10:13 pm

    I'll add my little addition.


    "It's been days since they threw me in this dang shed. They haven't fed me yet, and I dought that they ever will. But they don't know why I pulled the gun on Hazard. They don't understand. I think I'm the only one that knows. Before I was in here, everyone looked at me like I was crazy. Darman in particular. Every once in a while, I'll try to get out, but there's no hope... I've banged on the triple-locked door and even screamed out of anger a few times... Sometimes, I wonder if they just forgot about me and left. Maybe they didn't forget...

    Things aren't looking good for me. I don't think I can handle being in this tiny little hole any longer. I'll be able to survive for maybe another week if I conserve the small puddle of water I've discovered in the corner... I'm recording all this in my wrist-log. This may be my last entry..."


    -Mil


    So how was that?


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    Re: Brick Apocalypse.

    Post  Darman on Sun Aug 29, 2010 10:22 pm

    That was brilliant Million great addition, I guess I did forget about you eh? No food for the hungry. Razz
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    Post  1 Million Watts of Power on Sun Aug 29, 2010 10:26 pm

    Why thank you. And I kinda set up somthing with this entry that would take place during post-brickpocylapse. Smile
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    Re: Brick Apocalypse.

    Post  Alpha Beta on Sun Aug 29, 2010 10:34 pm

    Finally i'm included. Very Happy Laughing

    Great job, can't wait for another.

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